中涼寒

真的假的？:smile_41:

garry9692

向西一星期最少查兩至三次，好似做走火警演習咁！

ATP

what a pity................................

CP~WIN

以後坐左陣  有警察來  一個個咁送我地上警車  

garry9692

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原帖由 林天恒 於 29/3/2011 20:19 發表
3月13日晚上7點到 到向西一條友食個快仔 食完下樓比條友捉住左 本想走 但條友捉到我好撚實 後邊又有條友夾撚住我 無耐失手被爪 捉左入一個單位  就係我嫖個檔野  見到個店主 同拉客既 同埋幾隻雞  我個陣個腦諗會唔會 ...

老細，幾時出第工章呀！我信你架！

kelviniat123

寫稿佬,無稿費,最敗筆就是似部戲劇,全無新意.舊題材, 無唸頭, 唔好係度嚇人啦, 睇你講故仔, 悶到嘔！練吓先至出報告.

canon123

no edvience... how can they move you ah???? you were caught in the street and not in the room.... realibale rate 10%.....

and do not trying to make part 2, part 3, part 4....

nobody will have mood to go on....

but you still can go on with your compositiion.:smile_45:

ac18

尼篇比上一個作者可信性高D，暫未見破綻。師兄用咁多字寫份野比D兄弟，係乜都抵讚啦，我個人認為，只要出心比料，有D師兄弟得益，係乜都要支持讚吓。:smile_o12:

破軍仔仔

咁大鑊
期待樓主待續:smile_40: :smile_40: