mugen-purin

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原帖由 chefung 於 2009-6-16 01:11 PM 發表


Yours is not as good as mine

http://www.188channel.com/viewthread.php?tid=9833136&extra=page%3D1&page=1

LOL
I love that story so much

y admin said this post is 愚弄網友?:smile_41:

mugen-purin

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原帖由 chefung 於 2009-6-16 01:17 PM 發表


Yeah...
In fact, I am impressed by the girl very much
She actually knew who 王維林 is

That's my cup of tea
And her 深邃's eyes  
Awww, I have only seen this pair of eyes once, on my e ...

wats 深邃? is it u?:smile_41:

mugen-purin

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原帖由 chefung 於 2009-6-16 01:19 PM 發表


I don't know if that' true
It has a great response and people said his story is fake
Anyway, I enjoyed reading that a lot
At lesat, his writting skill is good

yes, his skill like a novel writer:smile_38: use so many 4 words n word i dunno

mugen-purin

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原帖由 chefung 於 2009-6-16 01:25 PM 發表


Not exactly a novel i guess
There are few a lot of cantonese dialogue in the story
That guy has good written chinese

Cherry is working on that too , to regain my deterioated written skill XD

will u write a poem for me?

多功能中場

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原帖由 mugen-purin 於 2009-6-16 12:30 AM 發表
will u write a poem for me?

i think cherry will write an erotic story instead:smile_47:

chefung

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原帖由 多功能中場 於 2009-6-16 01:26 PM 發表


in chinese or english?

In Chinese
My english writting is always bad XD

chefung

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原帖由 mugen-purin 於 2009-6-16 01:29 PM 發表
wats 深邃? is it u?:smile_41:

That means dark and deep eyes
Feeling like, there is a lot space behind the eyes

It is used to describe girls eyes XD

chefung

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原帖由 mugen-purin 於 2009-6-16 01:30 PM 發表
will u write a poem for me?

I am not that good :smile_42::smile_42:

chefung

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原帖由 mugen-purin 於 2009-6-16 01:30 PM 發表
yes, his skill like a novel writer:smile_38: use so many 4 words n word i dunno

LOL
Yeah, I know the words but still pretty much appreciate as I can't write like his
If his conjunction between sentences are better, then it's pretty perfect

[ 本帖最後由 chefung 於 2009-6-16 01:40 PM 編輯 ]

mugen-purin

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原帖由 chefung 於 2009-6-16 01:37 PM 發表


That means dark and deep eyes
Feeling like, there is a lot space behind the eyes

It is used to describe girls eyes XD

dunno do i hv this eyes?