fishball123

樓主嘅文筆絕對可以出小說！勁！支持！

keith0496

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原帖由 pamela_lin 於 2011-10-7 04:08 PM 發表
謝謝你們，只是十分鐘內粗製濫造的作品..因大家沒有地方用了，所以才草率推廣這半完成品.

哈哈，推廣，家姐好可愛呀

forssell427

keep watching your post , but first leave message here. just a quick question for you. you expected you would sleep with him , y did you mention that u have been married?

告東尼fans

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原帖由 pamela_lin 於 2011-10-7 04:08 PM 發表
謝謝你們，只是十分鐘內粗製濫造的作品..因大家沒有地方用了，所以才草率推出這半完成品.

樓主寫得好快啊:smile_o12:

pamela_lin

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原帖由 forssell427 於 2011-10-7 04:12 PM 發表
keep watching your post , but first leave message here. just a quick question for you. you expected you would sleep with him , y did you mention that u have been married?



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because I felt confused....and thanks for ur watched

keith0496

:S原來家姐頭先係打錯字，不過十分鐘打咁多野真係好難，又要工作，雖然話係半制成品，但我已經覺得好好，我真的很偑服，家姐依家係我既偶像

孤獨的推銷員

應用多謝Pamela 就真，
我地又得睇，又可以係度傾計

孤獨的推銷員

Revised.....應該我地多謝Pamela 就真！

pamela_lin

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原帖由 fishball123 於 2011-10-7 04:10 PM 發表
樓主嘅文筆絕對可以出小說！勁！支持！

這絕對是十分鐘貨色，沒有什麼感覺..相比之前一篇叫”詭異三角戀”，花了三天時間完成，還寫得滿枱拭睙紙巾..

keith0496

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原帖由 pamela_lin 於 2011-10-7 04:40 PM 發表
這絕對是十分鐘貨色，沒有什麼感覺..相比之前一篇叫”詭異三角戀”，花了三天時間完成，還寫得滿枱拭睙紙巾..

我有睇，分三段...我果日心情唔好，睇番晒d 舊post，睇到五點幾六點.....