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那夜我上了老婆情夫的老婆和女兒

 
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好文章!簡直比得上第一流,出電影出電影都得!



thank you=]

thanks good story

OMG! What a bad ending!!

cant believe that i can read such a well written story here.
The story lines are complex and the characters are greatly modeled. I really like the philosophy in it too! It has a huge potential to be the footnotes of a movie. I am looking forward to that.

P.S. the title line of the story is so misleading. However it shows how ridiculous that people won't even give a read if the name of title is reflecting the story itself.

thanks for share

忍不住回覆了...........其實這是很簡單的一篇文章,大綱非常鮮明
但細看下去........讓人感受得非常深入.........
我看過的色文之中.....這篇文筆雖不是最高......但,這絕對是我看過感受最深的一篇

Hate can cause so much troubles in this world.

thanks for sharing!! hope this is story only!!

未睇完,都要讚好!!:smile_38:

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