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Miss Yan日記 (p.33有新故事--高級程度會考監考篇)

 
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終於番黎la~努力~我好期待呀!!

Oh!!...
Welcome back! Miss Yan!!
We had waited for you for so long!!
I am pleased to hear from you...

Still looking forward to seeing your story!
Please continue the story...
I like your story so much!!!


Thanks for your sharing...

miss你總於都翻黎啦~希望你會繼續努力寫埋佢!

故事開展很不錯
老師與學生的題材本來就引人入性
半推半就的miss就更能挑起慾火

不過發展至此
miss來個性慾大解放
就似乎落入芸芸色情小說的老套路了
較開頭有點失色

無論如何
希望你繼續寫下去
勿令這篇好文變成太監文章 (沒有下面)

回覆 #11 applesit1210 的帖子

give you msn already

好高興miss翻黎啦,
唔該降降我哋慾火,
:smile_38: :smile_38: :smile_30: :smile_13:

支持miss繼續寫落去!

good story

support miss forever ~~~~

Miss等得我好苦呀....!快d快d快d.....!:smile_38:

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