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原帖由 hongkongken 於 2009-2-12 05:17 PM 發表
be honest, yes
all of your stories are nearly the same
start with kissing, licking puzzy (or sucking cock), licking anals
then start to fxxx (either man on top or woman on top etc), then eje ...
多謝你0既意見,我自問文筆麻麻不過我係真心分享,
其實出post的目的都唔係比你地當鹹故睇,只係share自己開心事,
所以我唔會刻意去諗點樣寫至夠引人入性,咁至夠真"性"情麻~
另外提醒師兄一樣野,想唔悶可以去情色文學區果面,
果度真係寫作居多,唔及我呢d真經驗咁悶.可以一看~