是的！記得多D支持原創版！

的確是浪費了心血，但為了故事人物的形象統一，無辦法。

結局篇係卷三啦。

看看有無時間修改和重貼。

等候看閣下的新作。

都要三個月！

我歡迎聽別人的意見，甚至批評，這樣才有進步。

閣下也有看東野圭吾，真好。

日本有很多優秀作家。反觀我們中國，在內地的小說綱裏的小說，都是爽文，都是長篇塞字拖劇情的作品。都不知到甚麼時候才會出一個東野圭吾這樣好的作家。

Fat Gor,

Story plot/theme very good, far far better than a lot movies and TV dramas.

I really hope you could have a revision, Please don't waste this good story plot and theme, Please write a revision for all ages people.

when I first read 陸文正getting drunk，秦晞汶和龔麗get him naked on bed, I found its very erotic.  陸文正 getting dressed and leave, no bath with 秦晞汶 and another naked night together, should more fit his character.  This is what I thought, sorry.

I remember section 2, have one paragraph person's name wrote wrong, I will re-read again and let you know, so that you can amend in your revision.  

Very Very happy reading, thank you very much.

[ 本帖最後由 bowen23 於 2014-11-6 05:05 PM 編輯 ]

大師吩咐，定當盡力。