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[原創] 秘書人妻凌辱日記 (第三章 P.3 Update on 2/11)

 
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見到大家正面的回應,又再激起我的鬥心。

come on ....

I think you are copy cat...since the first-third part is copy from >><< and the forth part is copy from a Adult book

from she who in adult part

well done ,one good show:smile_34:

呢篇好似睇曰本AV咁!好正丫!
寫文係娛己娛人家麻!之前我都講過!
作者吾享受寫作!又點會有好嘢睇!
希望bigkin99兄你明白!催你文既都係心急想睇者!
其實作者吾係欠大家既!等作者有空有威覺至慢慢寫啦:smile_38:
不過我都係要(温柔甘)催下你續文:smile_30:
期侍澳門非人之旅!

你寫得好好!加油呀!:smile_24:

今集表露左女主角既另一面........開頭係為老公,E家為自己物質生活:smile_19:

寫得真係好正. 希望可以快啲有第四章睇啦

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原帖由 煙精 於 2008-11-2 02:40 PM 發表 查看引用來源


p.s. 今次玩埋"女體盛",正呀

識嘢喎,果然係同道中人。

唔知香港邊道有得試女體盛?

曾經係網上 search 過,好似以前有 night club 攪過。

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原帖由 ngcheunghiu 於 2008-11-2 11:43 PM 發表 查看引用來源
I think you are copy cat...since the first-third part is copy from >>
You have this feeling may be due to the idea of my story is come from the story I have read before.

I will try to add some creativity in my story.

Thanks for your comment.

[ 本帖最後由 bigkin99 於 2008-11-3 08:27 PM 編輯 ]

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